Cinderella+Peer+Feedback

** Cinderella Story ** ** Peer Feedback Form **
 * Author**_

Prepare for your group conference by answering the following questions about your story.

1. What do you want your title to make readers think about? 2. How did you make your story different from the original? 3. What parts of your story would you like feedback on?

After your group conference, write the ideas from other group members that will help you improve your story: ** Peer Feedback Form ** Author _ _ Reviewer _

1. After the author has read the title to the story, what does the title make you think of?

Read through the questions before the author reads the story. Write notes as you listen.

2. Where did the author describe a person, place, or thing in precise, interesting language? 3. Where did the author use dialog well? 4. What parts did the author include that were different than the original story because of the different point of view? 5. What did the author put in the story that surprised you? 6. What did you like best about the story? 7. What could the author do to make the story better?